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cell phones - how great are they? take a look around you ,really look, everyone has one and everyone is using one even when they are not supposed to be. there goe a driver and they are talking on their cell phone oops was talking on their cell phone before they ran into that car that suddenly stopped. ,and that person in front of me at the drive thru, is holdng up the line as instead of paying for their food they are talking on their cell phone , hey you hang up i am going to be late.yes they are a great invention as we can stay in touch now no matter where we are,.but would we not be better off with out them? think about it? what was it like before cell phones? when you went out unless you gave a number no one could reach you? you didn't see everyone walking around with their ear attached to a cell phone or they are text messaging, or and those few thave the things attached to their ear that look like a giant bug crawaling out of their ear ---how fashionable is thaT/ ......